Brief Notes on Updated Essays

These essays are long, often dense, a style more appropriate to a book. On this website, they're more appropriate for teachers and older students. For easier reading onscreen, when I inserted them here (in 2004), I've split some long paragraphs and have used bold font and colors. For statistical updates, corrections, and my own second-thoughts, I've added links to this one page (below) in lieu of standard footnotes.
"The Teacher-Heal-Thyself Myth" notes:

In Brief: "... the root cause of much of our confusion about language today is the implicit assumption, seldom recognized or articulated, that language manipulation is intrinsically bad. Those who unconsciously accept this premise are condemned to feelings of guilt, frustration (due to their call for impossible conditions), and possibly even misanthropy, because it can be observed that all people, in all eras, in all lands do this "bad" thing of language manipulation. Indeed, most of the reformers, the critics of advertising, the texts and the teachers I've encountered have assumed this premise that language manipulation is bad. In contrast, let me state the premise that language manipulation is a neutral, natural human activity, and that any "goodness" or "badness" depends on the context of the whole situation."
(11 pp.)

$26 billion language industry Coen Reports: In 1973, U.S. advertising expenditures were $26 billion; in 2003, an estimated $249 billion..

Committee on Public Doublespeak. After organizing and being active in this committee for over 20 years, I resigned. The NCTE Executive Committee not only killed the prospering Quarterly Review of Doublespeak (over 7,000 subscribers -- see my letter of 1997), but also had replaced, by fiat, our elected Chair in order to put a person, a token minority, without any previous work with the committee, as Chair. Later, the QRD was replaced by an online "Doublespeak" chat group which (see for yourself) is a disaster of incoherence and rude bickering. Alas.

housing problems One of the major domestic problems we face in the future is the increasing population (203 million in 1970; 300 million in 2006) and decreasing housing and space. Certainly the differing interest groups (developers, home-owners, home-needers, young and old, Haves and Have-Nots) will have a "war of words" to intensify the good of their side, about such issues as "affordable housing," overcrowding, NIMBY, and the "homeless." Consider California's Proposition 13 (in 1978) which favors the existing home owners who were "grandfathered in" at 1975 tax rates, a major cause (according to billionaire businessman Warren Buffett) of California's 2003 budget crisis. When Buffett, as a volunteer advisor to Arnold Schwarzenegger during the 2003 California Recall election, said this publicly, he was quickly silenced by the campaign strategists because any talk about a reform of the "Prop 13" tax inequities would immediately stir up the "Haves," those millions of homeowners who already have such tax breaks.

farm groups Who's watching the watchman? Consumerist critics have pointed out that the Dept of Agriculture's diet recommendations in the USDA's food pyramid are increasingly influenced by scientists and appointees from the agribusiness industry (meat, sugar, dairy).

The Bush Administration has been notorious in its word choice to describe its environmental policies: their "Clear Skies" initiative amending the 1970 Clean Air Act; revising the "Clean Water" Act in a way which favors big business and increases pollution; their "Healthy Forests initiative" opens up wilderness areas for massive commercial logging, described as "thinning" and "harvesting."

technicians of literature The situation in "English" has grown worse in the past generation. Although "rhetoric and composition" teachers and texts have had very positive improvements, I believe the study of "literature" has become less coherent and more Balkanized with the abandonment of any standard canon or any clearly defined set of goals.

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"Watergate and the Language" notes

In brief: "... The dominant language problem of the whole Watergate affair was not what was said, but what was unsaid. Watergate essentially will be remembered as a classic example of concealment and secrecy, in all phases from the initial planning through all parts of the cover-up attempt. The language problem was that of omission, a more subtle kind of lying and deception than the "active" aggressive untruths we normally recognize as lies....

one of the political lessons which can be learned by all citizens is the need for comprehensive disclosure laws, codes of ethics, open information laws by which political groups, commercial corporations, and governments at all levels must reveal full, clear, understandable information about their financing and operations....

Watergate also revealed a serious, widespread public misunderstanding about the adversary role of a free press in a democratic society. Even after all of the disclosures and confessions of guilt, many Americans still believed that the press, the media, had railroaded Nixon. History teachers might point out to their students that American presidents in the past have had a long tradition of wanting the press to act as a volunteer "public relations" staff, but that the press sees its role more as a "watchdog," well aware that political power can be abused, has been in the past, and probably will be in the future. Perhaps schools ought to re-think their journalism and media programs. Instead of teaching the few kids how to put together a school newspaper, or training a few in the mechanical or electronic aspects of television, it might be more beneficial, if we instruct the many of our future voters about the issues and problems of the press in a free society." (6 pp.)

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"Liars in Public Places" notes

In 1974, during the Watergate era, a major textbook publisher (Scott Foresman) invited me to edit a high school text on "the language of Watergate." My editors were enthusiastic and helpful during the editorial process. But, at the last moment, the publisher intervened and killed the project because he felt both the title (Liars in Public Places) and the essays were insulting to our country's president. Soon afterward (August 9, 1974), our country's president, Richard Nixon resigned in order to avoid impeachment. The introduction to that censored book was later published as an essay in English Journal (October, 1975).
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"Mr. Orwell, Mr. Schlesinger, and the Language" notes:

In brief: "My objections to the attitudes of Orwell and Schlesinger fall into two general categories: the first grouping, misdemeanors of lesser importance because they are problems internal to these particular essays (The Good Old Days; Fast-Shuffling of a Stacked Deck); the second category, felonies, because they involve some important general attitudes about the use of language, about the analysis of language and politics (Virtue Triumphs! ; Hand-Wringing and Shoulder-Shrugging)....

If Orwell and Schlesinger had assumed that all people will always try to persuade others, that money and power tend to concentrate, that there will always be an inequality in persuasion situations (on one side the powerful persuader, whether King or Church, government or corporation; on the other side, the individual), then this cluster of assumptions could have been a reasonable starting point to suggest how people could move toward a greater degree of equality. In a democratic society, for example, such movement toward equality for the individual might be accomplished through both legislation and education....

Thus far, no one has written the Classic-Essay-About-What-To-Do-About-Language-Manipulation-By-Advertisers-And-Politicians. Nor is it likely that any one person, one essay, or one book will come up with a "solution." No one has fully itemized or specified those needed kinds of legislation (such as disclosure laws, open-meeting laws, "shield" laws covering journalists, standardized systems, Truth-in-Lending, Truth-in-Advertising, Freedom of Information laws, and so on) that will help balance the situation between organized persuaders and individual citizens. Nor has anyone organized coherently a comprehensive educational program (beginning with preschoolers' TV) that will train masses of people in a sophisticated literacy enabling them to recognize the persuasion patterns in the many forms of human languages and to understand the techniques' of the various media. It's this very absence of any satisfactory plan that ought to be stressed to students. Probably both Orwell and Schlesinger would agree that their essays were meant to provoke, not to solve; to awaken, not to lull; to begin and not to end a quest for a better understanding of language and politics. Orwell's essay is not the "last word" on the subject. Let us hope it's one of the first."
(6 pp.)
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"Red Tape" notes

This is a long review of Her
bert Kaufman's Red Tape, a wise, lucid, thoughtful, and detached analysis of one of society's most frustrating, confusing, exasperating, and universally hated problems. The book's introduction notes that it was intended to fill a gap, "that there was no serious book on governmental Red Tape. Satires, laments, denunciations, yes. But no analytical treatment of where Red Tape comes from and what can and cannot be done about it."

Everyone agrees that "unnecessary" paper work is bad. Everyone is against waste and "senseless regulations." The value of Kaufman's book is that it helps us to discriminate between unnecessary and necessary paperwork and procedures, to clarify what is senseless and what is sensible regulation, and to avoid either naive acceptance or uncritical rejection of what we call Red Tape. Back to "Red Tape"


The KIDVID Controversy: Child Molesters and "Statutory Deception" notes:

In brief: "All people, in all eras, in all countries intensify and downplay as they communicate to persuade others. But, some people have been more skillful, more aware, more able, more interested, or better trained than others. In the past, this natural inequality was limited. Before the 20th century inventions of radio, tv, and film, all previous persuaders in human history had rather small audiences -- either in a face-to-face situation, or limited to a literate audience, trained and able to read. Now, using the mass media, persuaders are able to reach large audiences including millions of people unable to read or write. Today, this situation is most obviously seen in the new nations of Africa and Asia. But even in other nations which have a high literacy rate, we watch and listen more than we read or write or speak.

During the past two generations, there has been a growing inequality between the professional persuaders and the average persuadees. In the past, only a rare person had the memory, intelligence, wit, and skills of strategy to be an effective persuader; these abilities died with the person. Today, computers can store massive amounts of information, retrieve it instantly, sort it for use according to pre-set plans. Such tools, together with money, media access, research abilities, and organized work teams are available today to the professional persuaders....

Consider the gross inequality, for example, in the United States which permits (at present) tv ads to be directed at very young children: the pre-school children watching the ads are hardly the equal of the sophisticated adult teams which plan them. In the past, I have written that certain advertisers were "child molesters." Indeed, this is an attention-getting charge, but it is accurate. In Language and Public Policy (p. 228), I presented this analogy:

"Our moral sense is outraged by inequality. In sexual matters we already have a sophisticated vocabulary to describe situations of equality and inequality. For example, we speak of seduction when there is not an equality, a mutuality of exchange, when the knowledgeable or crafty seducer takes advantage of the innocent or naive; we speak of rape when force or violence creates a situation of inequality; we speak of child molesting when age is concerned, when the young are abused. Using this analogy, it is clear that in language situations today many of our advertisers are seducers and child molesters, taking advantage of the young, the innocent, the naive, the gullible." (2 pp.)


growing inequality This situation has greatly increased during the past 30 years. Some changes are measurable, obvious: advertising expenditures in America increased from $26 billion in 1973 to $249 billion in 2003; television has expanded in size and scope to a worldwide, satellite system, from a few networks to hundreds of cable channels; increased concentration of mass media ownership into power into 5 mega-corporations; increased concentration of American textbook publishers into 4 mega-corporations; the internet has grown from almost zero to a huge presence; increased income gap between rich and poor; increased spending in political and issue advertising. Some changes are not measurable, but are real: increased sophistication of the technology (including computers, data collection), increased sophistication of the persuaders themselves and their techniques. Thirty years from now, what?
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"Channel One, Misconceptions Three" notes:

In brief: "Critics during the past year have pointed out some of the educational and legal problems of having Channel One. But, they have overlooked that this serious escalation in "commercialism in the classroom" has made such quick inroads because of three very common, and very wrong, unstated premises and unspoken assumptions in our culture; namely, that ads are not significant, not effective, and not harmful....

not significant
... Most people see ads as petty annoyances or interruption -- bothersome, but trivial, unimportant, unworthy of serious consideration. We get irked when ads intrude upon our time or litter our space, but we brush them away like pesky mosquitoes. When the commercials appear on TV, we get up and leave the room. On our VCRs, we zap them out, or zip by them. But, we don't worry much about them. They're "just" ads. Ads, however, are "units of persuasion." If we had seriously thought of ads in this way, we might not have allowed them to be in our schools or to appear on children's television programs. We certainly don't tolerate strangers on the street walking up to our kids and trying to sell them something....

not effective... One reason people think ads are ineffective is that very few people have been adequately trained during their school years in persuasion analysis. Thus, many people erroneously limit the concept of persuasion to direct and explicit rational arguments and "command propaganda." In reality, most of the persuasion we encounter everyday is indirect and implicit, using nonrational techniques (such as emotional appeals, association techniques, and "image-building") and long-term, low-key "conditioning" propaganda....

not harmful ...
Most people see ads as "harmless" if the products advertised do not cause immediate, direct, and visible harm. Many educators, seeking the hardware and programming benefits of Channel One, said they tolerated the commercials as "reasonable trade-offs" (unintended side-effects) because there were only "harmless" ads -- for products such as cereals, candy bars, and fast-food restaurants: "What's wrong with that? The kids have already seen these ads on TV at home." If we limit the idea of "harm" only to harmful consequences which are immediate, direct, and visible, then most ads on TV are not "harmful."... Not all harms are immediate, direct, and visible. Some harmful consequences can be delayed, indirect, and invisible (such as in DDT, asbestos, and lead-based paint), making them very difficult to identify and to restrict. All the problem cases today (smoking, nutrition, chemical additives, alcohol) involve such delayed, indirect, and invisible harms. One cigarette or one greasy hamburger or one candy bar is not going to kill a person instantly. But long-term cigarette addiction will cause 470,000 deaths in America this year, and our national diet of junk-foods (heavily advertised) will contribute to a nutrition crisis and enormous public health problems...."
( 6 pp.)
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"Channel One: Asking the Wrong Questions" notes:

In brief: "The problem with the surveys about Channel One is that they often ask the wrong questions -- blurring issues, omitting relevant information, and neglecting ethical issues. ... All arguments about the 10 minutes of programming are side issues.... To focus on any of [these issues] works on Whittle's behalf, as a diversionary smokescreen. These less relevant issues blandly assume the validity of the commercial "package" accompanying the news. They don't deal with the real issue specific to Channel One: two minutes of ads....

The main issue is the presence of television advertising -- of commercial persuasion - actively targeted at the audience of children within the classroom and sanctioned by the schools.... Commercial television is the appropriate venue for such persuasion. In our society, commercial television is the main marketplace, where (as the courts have often ruled) people expect puffery and "sellers' talk" that intensify the "good" about a product and downplay the "bad." In a society that values free speech and free enterprise and that accommodates diverse political and commercial persuaders, we must expect to live in a verbal environment of many persuaders in competition.... The schools, however, are the appropriate venue for neutrality and objectivity, the place to teach the young how to analyze and understand the techniques and patterns of persuasion common to all persuaders....

Why did so many well-meaning educators sign up so quickly for Channel One? Partly, Whittle was a skillful salesman: he came gifts in hand, not only offering thousands of dollars worth of "free" hardware and packaged programming, but also providing the mental rationalizations (the "good intentions") needed by the teachers to justify their actions: altruism ("doing it for the benefit of the children") and pragmatism ("reasonable trade-offs"). Further, he flattered his audiences, praising their sophistication ("Teachers know best," "Kids today know all about TV ads").... Whittle's blitz was well funded, well organized (one centralized national thrust, dealing with thousands of individual school boards), and met with little organized opposition....

Ethically, it is wrong to exploit children. Teachers may agree in general but sometimes exempt themselves because of their "good intentions." But, as the debate continues, more ethical questions are being raised....

Avoidance of these questions may be the basic strategy of those who advocate Channel One. Once educators grant the premise that their function in Whittle's scheme is to deliver children as audiences to persuaders (or that ads are "units of persuasion," "effective," and so on), then they are in an uncomfortable position, embarrassed that others would view them as being seduced or bribed by Whittle.... Not only have they made a wrong decision in a long-term contract, but others are challenging their intelligence and integrity. It's no wonder that some educators are going to get very huffy and defensive ("We've already settled that issue!"). Perhaps "cognitive dissonance" might describe this dilemma of educators who thought they were doing the right thing and then were criticized as exploiting the children. Both positions can't be held at once, so avoidance of this ethical argument is their first defense....

Denial
is the second strategy. The compromise position reached by many teachers is that of the "reasonable trade-offs." (unintended side effects). But this argument will not hold up to close scrutiny if one considers the teachers' lack of time and training, the sophistication of the persuasion techniques, and the imbalance of the situation....

In practice, ethical issues are often blurred by hidden agendas. There are some "dirty little secrets" seldom mentioned in the public arguments over Channel One: some teachers like the program because it's entertaining ("I want my MTV!"), or an opportunity for them to catch up with their other chores while students are pleasantly occupied. Some administrators and school boards like the program because it's "easy money" -- funding they won't have to seek from an increasingly grudging taxpayer.... Channel One will continue to be divisive as long as it is in the schools. "Good intentions" are not enough. Initially, teachers (or school boards) could plead that they didn't realize the implications. But, future arguments over adoptions and renewals should focus on these ethical questions, not on popularity, not on programming. The first question must be self-reflexive: Is it ethical for educators to deny the ethical issues raised? (6 pp.)

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Lies & Deceptions | notes

This was the final chapter (#12) of The Pep Talk (1980). When I originally researched the topic in the mid-1970s, I was surprised at the scarcity of analytical writing about lying and deception. I thought that this lack of discovery was my fault, so I was reassured when Sissela Bok's brilliant book (Lying, 1978) opened with her "astonishment" at the paucity of writing about lying: "the major works of moral philosophy of this century, so illuminating in other respects, are silent on this subject. The index to the eight-volume Encyclopedia of Philosophy contains not one reference to lying or to deception, much less an entire article devoted to such questions."

My extended review (5 pp.) of Sissela Bok's Lying: Moral Choice in Public and Private Life, this most important contemporary writing about the ethics of lying and deception, immediately follows my own essay. We wrote for different reasons and different audiences. Her treatment is a most subtle and sophisticated philosophical inquiry, concerned primarily with ethical issues, moral choices, and human intentions. Mine is a simple, sorting out process, pragmatically concerned with providing some useful tools of understanding for the average reader.

In brief, my essay systematically examines issues about lies and deceptions: any statement can be a lie, any behavior deceptive; such lies and deceptions can be used to attack or defend, to intensify one's own " good " or the others ' " bad, " to downplay one's own " bad " or the others' "good." Lies and deceptions involve intent, not technique. To focus on the real problem areas, it may help to sort out what is not deceptive, to clarify common controversies. People have differing opinions, sometimes illusions and delusions, and can make errors. Furthermore, fictions (including metaphors and hyperboles) and imitations need not be deceptive, nor are implied messages (including suggestions and evasions) involving omitted elements. Promises and threats about the future also involve elements of ability and changing conditions. "Good intentions" motivate most deceptions, including white lies in everyday situations and political lies told by leaders; if discovered, liars usually claim lies were told for "your own benefit." However, people deceived seldom appreciate such "good intentions" and often see them as self-serving rationalizations. Issues of governmental lying and deception are very crucial in a democratic society and need more attention." (23 pp.)

After Bok's groundbreaking work, other writers have followed: e.g. Paul Gray's cover-story overview,"Lies, Lies, Lies" in Time (10/5/92); books by academics, e.g. David Nyberg, The Varnished Truth: Truth Telling and Deceiving in Ordinary Life (1993); James Stiff & Gerald Miller, Deceptive Communication (1993) esp. nonverbals; Charles Ford, Lies, Lies, Lies: The Psychology of Deceit (1999); Evelin Sullivan, The Concise Book of Lying (2001); and many popular books, often promising how to detect lies. <> A google.com search gets 55,000 hits for the terms "lying and deception," but, from a quick look, they seem to be mostly examples, accusations, and rantings rather than analyses.

"Weapons of Mass Destruction"

In the original text, I wrote:
"The use of vague abstractions also allows flexibility. In a threat situation, for example, it's often better for a diplomat to threaten a vague "appropriate action" than to specify a specific response ("We'll bomb Moscow"). This vagueness gives both sides some leeway to compromise without losing face or being forced to go ahead with the threat."

In 2004, I add this example, immediately following:
"Weapons of mass destruction"
is such a vague abstraction, a high-level generalization which includes all chemical, biological, and radiological weapons -- both tactical and strategic -- from local battlefield gas attacks to long-range bombing of cities using nuclear bombs. One of the key arguments concerning the 2002 Iraq war was President Bush's frequent use of this term with shifting and multiple meanings. It can be explicitly said that Saddam Hussein did use WMD -- gas -- in local tactical attacks. But, President Bush's frequent use of WMD implicitly suggested that Iraq had long-range strategic weapons which posed an imminent danger of an attack on the United States. This was the causus belli - the cause of war - justifying a pre-emptive strike. But, when such stockpiles of weapons (and their delivery systems) couldn't be found after the war, a great controversy occurred. Much of the world believed that President Bush was deliberately deceptive; but, the Bush administration argued its "good faith" intentions and that the weapons simply hadn't been discovered yet, or that they were moved to another country.

Noble Lies

Today ( 2004), if I were to revise this essay, I'd add a discussion of Plato's "noble lie" -- his influential concept that lying by leaders is excusable when done with a noble goal, for the benefit of the followers. But, I'd certainly follow the analysis by our modern gadfly, I.F.Stone (in The Trial of Socrates) that Plato's attitude is anti-democratic, condescending, paternalistic -- and wrong. We've had enough recent experience with our leaders lying to us, for "our own benefit."

Of related interest, see: David Corn, The Lies of George W. Bush (2003)
From the Introduction:
"George W Bush is a liar. He has lied large and small. He has lied directly and by omission. He has misstated facts, knowingly or not. He has misled. He has broken promises, been unfaithful to political vows. Through his campaign for the presidency and his first years in the White House, he has mugged the truth -- not merely in honest error, but deliberately, consistently, and repeatedly to advance his career and his agenda. Lying greased his path toward the White House; it has been one of the essential tools of his presidency. To call the 43rd president of the United States a prevaricator is not an exercise of opinion, not an inflammatory talk-radio device. This insult is supported by an all too extensive record of self-serving falsifications. So constant is his fibbing that a history of his lies offers a close approximation of the history of his presidential tenure."

Yet, after 300 pages of documenting the President's deceptive evasions, omissions, implications, misstatements, errors, (about the Iraq war, tax cuts, corporate scandals, September 11th, and so on), the author has to qualify the term "liar" because, precisely speaking, a lie involves the intent to deceive: "Does Bush believe his own lies? Did he truly consider a WMD-loaded Saddam Hussein an imminent threat to the United States? Or was he knowingly employing dramatic license because he wanted war for other reasons?" (p.320)

Such a book points out the limits of my essay's simple sorting-out process. I could point out to David Corn that Bush's deceptions were not, technically, lies -- because we don't know if the President really knew something was untrue and he intended to deceive. But, this kind of linguistic precision doesn't help much. I would assume that -- in any situation -- the President would claim "good intentions." Thus, our focus should be on consequences.

David Corn concluded with a chapter speculating about the credibility issue: while activists and extremists may have been enraged, the mainstream media treated the credibility gap almost as a charming idiosyncrasy, naughty but harmless. Why was the press -- and the public -- so easy on the President's deceptions? Was it a show of support for a wartime president? Was it a partisan thing? Republicans were furious about President Clinton's evasions ("What 'is' is?") and his mental reservation in defining "having sex" ('I did not have sex with that woman."), but Democrats were more tolerant ("boys will be boys") and afterwards Clinton's popularity remained strong. In terms of his image, Clinton may not have been trustworthy in his personal life, but he was competent in public affairs, and benevolent ("on our side"). So also, President Bush, despite his inexperience and errors, seemed well intentioned and was well liked ("on our side') by his supporters who were more tolerant of his exaggerations.

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"Thinking About Thinking" notes

This is my own introductory classroom lecture (ideas derived from Newman) spoken to mostly bright young people more eager to spend their time elsewhere, but who were required to take a composition course.

The lecture opens: "As you analyze ads and compose your own writing, be more conscious and reflective about your own thinking processes. Be concerned especially with attention, orientation, and alternation.... After many words (and appropriate gestures), the lecture closes: To recap: as you analyze ads or compose your own work, first pay attention (observing closely). Then, try to be more self-aware of your own mental processes of orientation (knowing where you are, what you are doing) and alternation (shifting focus).

Then I add (my frequently-added mantra): "Are ads worth all this attention? No, but your mind is.

If you can better learn how to analyze things, to recognize patterns, to sort out incoming information, to see the parts, the processes, the structure, the relationships within things so common in your everyday environment, then it's worth your effort. After all, you'll continue to see thousands of ads in the future. If you can use them to your own advantage, to help you become a better analyst and a better composer, then it's worth your time and attention."

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"Rent-a-Rhetorician" notes

To publicize the release of the 2nd edition of The Pitch (1991), I wrote this tongue-in-cheek "Press Release" of my "resignation" as an ad critic and my new career as a rhetorician for rent, with advertising space available in my classroom and on me. It was picked up by the Quarterly Review of Doublespeak and subsequently by the Chicago Tribune's nationally-syndicated columnist, Bob Greene. (Photos by Dick Burd.)

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